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Editing Tips For First Drafts

Hello fellow writers, re-writers and readers

Just a quick note to let you know I’ve finished my first draft of the manuscript

IN The Woods“In The Woods”

I’m very excited about the story line, it’s different from my last books and I really like the protagonist, Samantha Tremblay. She’s a Vermont Forest Ranger who’s involved with solving a murder after she stumbles across the first dead body in the woods. Samantha has her own quest as well, finding her Native American roots. I hope to represent that group of people as best I can. We all want to know who we are, where we come from, but for Native Americans, it’s often a difficult path.

I still have to edit some more, but I think a break is needed just to forget about the work for a week, so then I can begin again with fresh eyes. This is an editing practice—to step away and let the brain rest, and it works!

My Process to write first draft:

  • I write the draft using Scrivener to help me make a cohesive story line using the tools available, which includes tracking my word count, a great motivator.
  • Then I compile it into a Word docx file and use the editor in Word.
  • Next, I use the Grammarly editing software loaded into my Word software (it turns the Word editor off but gives many more insights, like overused words).
  • Last step, I take each chapter separately and paste it in the Hemingway App software for desktop and review and make changes as appropriate to make the manuscript easier to read.

When my first draft is finished, I load it into Jutoh software and create a quick eBook (no worries about meta data etc. yet) and share it with Beta reader(s). Then I’m ready to let someone else read it while I rest. So, this week I’m on vacation.

A few other editing tips:

I’m taking a week off, even writers deserve a vacation.

But do we ever really take one?

Of course, I’ll be reading by the pool, but if you’re like me, that becomes part of the writing training. I can no longer read just for the sake of reading. I dissect the plot, check the clues, see if the characters are congruent. I do the same when I watch a movie or television show. It’s a good way to recognize others’ skill of their craft.

The story could be the most thrilling you’ve experienced or a complete bomb, but always a learning experience for you.

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Here’s some photos I took of Brunswick Springs

Live Like It’s Your Last Breath

Photo by George Hodan
It’s a beautiful spring day. The rain has passed, the skies are blue and the grass green, and the birds are singing. As we appreciate the beautiful surroundings, preparing for our spring holidays, it’s easy to forget the truths in the world. We are lulled into a false nicety, a fairytale land, and hope for goodness. ‘The world would be a beautiful place if we all loved each other’.

Art by Frits Ahlefeldt

But if we take a good look behind the greenery, and peer into the dense brush, what we’ll see is the savage nature, the rule of survival of the fittest. Humankind is part of that brutal nature.

Despite the cheery veneer, the world is in turmoil even on the most pleasant days. While we work and play in suburbia, people are killed in Syria and other places ruled by tyrants. Those who survive atrocities will have their guard up, even though they are caring individuals who wanted freedom, they are changed. They became tuned into their basic instincts for survival.

Even the darkest of hearts can love.

Now some will say, “that’s a grim outlook on life” and I will respond to you that my outlook is based on reality. It’s the truth, and for every good moment, there is another equally brutal one.

Today Catholics all over the world celebrate Good Friday, the day Jesus was nailed to the cross. Some of the men who betrayed him had once been his followers. Fear for their lives allowed them to falter in their love. We are human, that’s what we do, get defensive when we are scared and unsure of the things going on around us.

So friends, while many authors write about the trials we face, often with the hero overcoming the odds, that’s exactly what they are unrealistic probabilities. A fanciful wish that isn’t in sync with reality. That may be why we have relied on stories like Aesop fables and the Grimm nursery rhymes, to show the brutal realities of life to our children. They have been useful to balance out the happily ever after.

I write darker scenes, subtle evil based in reality, but show how good people do bad things and sometimes, there is no happily ever after like we’ve been groomed to expect. There is always something else waiting for us to respond to, just around the corner.

Only if you see life as the good and bad, the gentle and the brutal evil, can we really say to ourselves, “I see and know the truth.”

Christians are celebrating Holy Week, others are celebrating Passover, all these traditional religious holidays are wrapped around both sides, the good and evil of the world. The holy texts tell us of the root of evil, our own instincts to survive, and ask that we rise above, but many cannot pass above the survival instinct. Evil exists, and no matter how often we try to spread our love philosophies, it is present and destined to remain because it’s baked into our DNA.

My message is to stay aware, don’t fool yourself, and enjoy the happiness you have in your life with vigor because it could all be gone in a second. <snap fingers>

Photo by Petr Kratochvil

Live like it’s your last breath because it could be.

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Paying tribute to some who have already left us in 2017

Photo by George Hodan
RIP J Geils (rock musician) RIP Charlie Murphy (Chappelle show comedian)  RIP Chuck Berry (RollOver Beethoven) RIP Mary Tyler Moore (actress and comedian) RIP Bill Paxton (Aliens, Twister, Titanic, Apollo 13)   RIP Sir John Hurt (elephant man) RIP Miguel Ferrer (Twin Peaks and Crossing Jordan) RIP Paul O’Neill (Trans-Siberian Orchestra) #RIP Don Rickles (comedian)  RIP Lonnie (Chicago blues)  RIP Gilbert Baker(civil rights activist – rainbow flag)  RIP Noreen Fraser (TV producer and activist against cancer)  RIP Carl Clark (WWII metal of honor veteran) RIP Sib Hashian (Drummer -Boston)  RIP Martin McGuinness (Irish Republic Army commander) #RIP Colin Dexter (author of Detective Morse novels)  RIP James Cotton (blues musician) RIP Fiora Corradetti Contino (female conductor of opera) RIP Tommy LiPuma (jazz producer – Natalie Cole and George Benson) RIP Jack Harris (produced 1950’s The Blob) RIP Mike Connors (Manix) RIP William Peter Blatty ( author of The Exorcist) RIP Gene Cernan (walked on moon) RIP Geoff Nicholas (Black Sabbath) RIP John Wetton ( Asia and King Crimson) RIP Al Jarreau (singer)  RIP Warren Frost (Twin Peaks as Doc Hayward and Seinfeld) RIP Yevgeny Yevtushenko (author, poet of Babi Yar)

 

Encourage Others To Read A Book For Their Health

reading a bookFor years we’ve  heard that reading is good for us, yet our county’s reading habits seem to be on a slow, steady decline. There could be many reasons, like more recreational television and games, YouTube and the internet that absorb our free time, but this is crazy.

We live in a time of trends to do everything we can to live healthy lifestyles like:

  • eat the right foods
  • minimize our footprint on the earth
  • save animals and endangered species

We shouldn’t forget one of the most important things we can do for ourselves, to optimize our  – BRAIN HEALTH

Here is a cold, ugly fact:

In October 2015 Smithsonian.com reported results from a Pew Research survey that revealed  27% of the population hadn’t read a book in the past year.

<gulp> If that’s not a horror story, then I’ve never read one.

The National Endowment for the Arts have been tracking our reading habits (as well as other considerations regarding the arts), and they created a research report titled:

Reading At Risk: A Survey of Literary Reading in America

The results of the survey were accumulated for conclusions, see them for yourself by checking out:

  Section 4. Trends in Literature Participation, 1982 – 2002 on Page 21

 . . . there has been a substantial decrease in the percentage of people reading literature, from 57 percent in 1982 to 47 percent in 2002, a decline of 10 percentage points.
 i found you!They have been tracking our recreational reading habits for years, and although our rate of college graduates has increased, the number of literary books we read for pleasure have decreased, while our television viewing is booming.

Outlander SeriesDon’t get me wrong; there is a place in out lives for media. I like viewing television shows like the Outlander series (but I read the books first) and I wouldn’t suggest that we shouldn’t be looking forward to season three of Twin Peaks which is happening again (read Mark Frost’s book first, you’ll thank me later).IMG_5279

Along with these other sources of entertainment if we add the fact that there are many more books published today, well, you can see an author’s predicament.

It’s getting harder and more competitive to find willing readers.

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Christopher Ingraham wrote a great article for the Washington Post “The long Steady Decline of Literary Reading”  last September 7th that noted more current numbers regarding our reading habits. (I borrowed the diagram used)

This trend is disturbing. We know that people who read exercise their brain in the areas where we develop empathy, an ability the world could use a little more of right now. So if our reading habits diminish will our ability to empathize as well?
This fact about reading and how it is exercising our empathetic muscles has been documented in many tests, as well as other health benefits from reading. Here is another article about the benefits posted last August via the online magazine Trends In Cognitive Sciences

In long-term associations and shorter-term experiments, engagement in fiction, especially literary fiction, has been found to prompt improvements in empathy and theory-of-mind.

Trends In Cognitive Sciences 

cognitivePeople exercise their brain while reading in the areas where we develop empathy. Reading increases cognitive brain ability.

Read more about it in an article from Psychology Today written January 2014 by Christopher Bergland here:  Fiction Improves Brain Connectivity and Function via PsychologyToday.com

“At a minimum, we can say that reading stories—especially those with strong narrative arcs—re-configures brain networks for at least a few days. It shows how stories can stay with us. This may have profound implications for children and the role of reading in shaping their brains.” —Dr Berns

Conclusion: Reading Improves Embodied Cognition and Theory of Mind

The Huffington Post had a nice article written by Laura Schocker in October 2013  Six Science-backed Reasons To Go Read A Book Right Now  She cited increased empathy as a benefit, too. She also added: books chill you out, sharpen your brain, keep Alzheimer’s disease at bay, promotes better sleep habits, and lessens our bouts of depression.

What’s My Number One Reason To Read—I’m Curious

Books offer us new worlds to explore. Please keep watching great shows, too. Movies and video games offer great entertainment, and I can’t wait to experience VR (virtual reality).

But I implore you to spread the word that we all need to read as well—For our health

Only with a book can we totally immerse ourselves into a different world with our unique perspective and convey the written words in our own mind, using our own creativity to interpret the story. That’s the beauty of reading.

We can all read the same book, but we all come away with a different VISION. I rest my case.

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Writing Is Hard, Sometimes

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Writing is hard. This sentiment repeats itself over writing posts everywhere.

Why is it so? I reflected on this notion and came to realize that it’s not a correct universal statement.

It should read: “Writing is hard, sometimes.”

There are times when you the writer knows what’s in your head, you understand the scene that you want to share, and the words just flow. That’s a great experience, and any writer feels a sense of catharsis, a physical release, and satisfaction. Even though we know, we’ll probably have to rewrite it and spruce it up a bit later; these moments can keep us motivated.

The writing becomes difficult when we face a scene that we need to write, and we don’t want to relive that experience for personal reasons. I ran into this the other day, so let me share my experience.

I have a scene in my new WIP, In The Woods, where my protagonist, Samantha, meets up with an old friend, Zach. Big deal, right. Well, it was tedious to write because the character’s mindset is so far from my own.

You see, I’ve been happily married for over thirty years. To write with the correct mindset of Samantha, I had to remember what it feels like to confront a person whom I’ve admired in the past, held a torch for, and was crushed by the breakup. Not only that, but Samantha was hurt to the point where her character had no other love interests since.

samanthaThe protagonist’s entire sense of trust had been depleted when the man she was infatuated with had left her hometown. Now he walks into her life again, and feelings are stirred. Add the conflict of Samantha having to work side by side with this guy.

Yes, most of us have experienced unrequited love, but do you remember how it felt? Can you spill the right tension onto the page?

Thank goodness I have a dependable memory and also have counseled many broken hearts over the years. I pulled in those real life stories and used them. I found it uncomfortable to go back there, into the thoughts of the past, things better left behind.

But the scene called for the emotional state of a young teenager, hurt and disillusioned, now a grown woman trying to come to terms with herself. I had to go there.

Situations like this scene are when the writing is hard work. We search our feelings even those out of our comfort zones and are willing to relive healed wounds and tap into the emotional drive needed to reach the momentum the scene demands.

Here are three things that may help any writer:

  • First, answer questions about your character’s motives as an objective onlooker.
  • Then let the character speak in their own voice, not your past, but their past.
  • Last, tap your own emotions to create a mood, but do not rewrite your own story.

I wonder, does anyone else want to share a scene they had a hard time writing? Please share and post your comment.

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The Things We Say: through a glass darkly

It’s funny how we repeat phrases often without thinking of where they came from or the context of the meaning. I noticed one such phrase recently

through a glass darkly“.

I had suggested to a reading group at BookLikes.com that we should read a book series called:

withintheglassdarklyWITHIN THE GLASS DARKLY by William Gareth Evans published in 2010.

It’s a Gothic tale based on characters introduced in 1872 by the author Joseph. T. Sheridan Le Fanu in his novella Carmilla which was included in his short story volume named In A Glass Darkly.

indexWhile searching for the original short story volume, so that I could read the story that inspired William and other authors, (even Bram Stoker’s Dracula was inspired by the story Carmilla),

I came across another novel Through A Glass Darkly by Karleen Koen an historical fiction published in 2003.

In A Glass Darkly is also a short story written by Agatha Christieregatta_mystery – first published in 1939 by our favorite sleuth author

and now available in a collection, The Regatta Mystery and other stories .

I was curious of what else would turn up referencing glass darkly . . .

A few more strokes of the keys and I discovered poetry regarding this phrase as well. THROUGH A GLASS, DARKLY is a poem by Gen. George S. Patton, Jr. which you can read by clicking the link.

throughglassdarklyfilmThere was also a well received movie Through A Glass Darkly made in 1961

Directed by Ingmar Bergman, famous for his close up shots without movement of any  kind to magnify the intensity the character’s emotions, as well as the famous double face shot of two characters looking in opposite directions and never meeting each others POV unable to communicate or understand each other.

This is all heavy stuff and with so many people inspired through the ages, and in various art forms,  I decided to get to the crux of the matter.

Glass darkly is a term coined for a mirror.

mirrorMirrors have been around in one form or another for ages. Long ago people used a metal base like bronze to see their reflection and had to polish the metal vigilantly. Later forms were layered with glass tiles on top, but still the image was dark, thus glass darkly. Learn more about the history of mirrors here: The History of Mirror: Through A Glass, Darkly

The term was even referenced in the Bible, yes that long ago . . .

For now we see through a glass, darkly; but then face to face: now I know in part; but then shall I know even as also I am known.  And now stays faith, hope, charity, these three; but the greatest of these is charity.

(1 Corinthians 13: 12-13)

Who knew!

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More Info:

Indie Wire The Essentials: The 15 Greatest Ingmar Bergman Films

through-a-glass-darkly“Through A Glass Darkly” (1961)

A slow and painful disintegration of a family vacationing at a summer home on the island of Fårö trying to cope with the deteriorating mental state of the family’s eldest daughter Karin who has suffered a nervous breakdown.

 

Within My World – Dracula, the musical

The musical is by Gareth Evans and Christopher J. Orton, with orchestrations by the noted British composer and producer, Ian Lynn.